This week’s strip continues with along the same story as the last 2 strips. The familiar territory of being at happy hour and trying to strike up a conversation. Sometimes it goes well and sometimes it just goes!
I’m not sure the background works well in this strip. I may have gotten too lazy on this one! I must admit that backgrounds are one of my weak areas. I usually find myself trying to decide just what to do with the background. It’s definitely an aspect I need to work on. Stay tuned…
Kevin
ha! really liking the flow of the strip, especially the silhouette break in the third panel. and riley’s expression in the last panel is just pure gold! my critique though, would be to watch out for proportions, such as riley’s hand in the last panel.
She was a lush anyway, drink in hand and waiting for the next – keep it moving….