Let’s say you’re out on the town with your pals. Everything’s going great until one of your buddies decides to pick a fight with another group due to testosterone overload. Of course, you’ve got his back. Unless…these guys look like they just got done posing for the cover of “I’m Big and Muscular and My Shirt is Really Really Tight†Magazine. Well, you have to help him, but you’re not going to like it…
Originally, I had some text in the last panel. I ended up taking it out. I think it works without it. Actually I had more text overall. I thought it got too wordy. So, I tried to condense it make it more readable. Anyway, I hope you enjoy!
great stuff! lots of good elements here, especially the background touches. the night time stars, the shading and lighting. all good stuff!
Hey, when someone steps on your shoes. They have to die. Them’s the rules.
The shadows definitely help the corner wall background, especially the breaking of the shadow tangent as it moves from one wall to the next. Also being able to see the sky above the more distant wall is a big help – perhaps you had that in the last strip too but it was covered by a word bubble?
Keep it up!
Oh I have been there before, of course I just get see the disaster unfold as macho men can’t handle a conversation without putting up their dukes. I like the overall lesson in this strip, don’t get lured into nonsense by other people’s bad choices. Oh and I guess its pretty too LOL I leave the technical comments to Johnny and Wheezy
I definitely didn’t have those elements in the last strip. Thanks to constructive comments like yours I put more thought into how to convey perspective better this time around! Thanks!!
I’m here to make you laugh and to make you think. This is what I do. haha.